the house style on your cover page works well together however, the coverlines do not look good in just one place. i suggest that you space them out to make it look appealing and add coverlines that are more to do with the college itself.
contents page: space the pictures out neatly and keep the space inbetween even. the colours are too harsh and will look better with neutral colours
The style and mise en scene of the front cover works very well and looks professional and the use of font is also visually appealing. However the puff does not match the rest of the page and there is no colour scheme. The contents page has an interesting layout but the pictures could be the same size and laid out more neatly so there is less empty space.
Your front cover is good as it includes all of the right things required when making a front cover. However, you need to edit your post of the front cover and upload it as an image rather than a print screen so that the ruler lines cannot be seen on the front cover. Furthermore, your contents page is really good too, it only needs a few minor improvements.
The magazine cover image is of a good quality the use of the font work well with the cover image. You have also used a range of conventions for a magazine . You could have linked the content page to the front cover more but the format for the content page is effective.
the house style on your cover page works well together however, the coverlines do not look good in just one place. i suggest that you space them out to make it look appealing and add coverlines that are more to do with the college itself.
ReplyDeletecontents page: space the pictures out neatly and keep the space inbetween even. the colours are too harsh and will look better with neutral colours
The style and mise en scene of the front cover works very well and looks professional and the use of font is also visually appealing. However the puff does not match the rest of the page and there is no colour scheme. The contents page has an interesting layout but the pictures could be the same size and laid out more neatly so there is less empty space.
ReplyDeleteYour front cover is good as it includes all of the right things required when making a front cover. However, you need to edit your post of the front cover and upload it as an image rather than a print screen so that the ruler lines cannot be seen on the front cover. Furthermore, your contents page is really good too, it only needs a few minor improvements.
ReplyDeleteThe magazine cover image is of a good quality the use of the font work well with the cover image. You have also used a range of conventions for a magazine . You could have linked the content page to the front cover more but the format for the content page is effective.
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