This looks great, you've done some great photography and I like your little social media box in the corner, here are my critisicms: - 14 is missing a full stop at the end - I don't like the 'main cover story' headline, usually the main story is more implicit that it is actually a main story in a mag ie. it will be large or emboldened - Your photography is professional but the editing not so much, it looks like you directly placed the images onto the page without doing any background editing or anything, it might've looked better if you removed the background in some of the pics?
I think your contents page is great and very eye-catching and also appealing to your target audience. I like the fact that you have included many different images to show what will be included in certain pages and that you have continued to use your colour scheme. I think the black background is great as it allows everything else on the page to really stand out. Lastly your photography is looks very professional.
Your contents page looks good. You have used a variety of images, all shot at a high quality. The layout is simple yet effective. My only suggestions would be: Page numbers - for a double page you only need to have on page number of the right side of the page. Front cover image - i don't think the cover page should be on the contents page it looks pointless.
This looks great, you've done some great photography and I like your little social media box in the corner, here are my critisicms:
ReplyDelete- 14 is missing a full stop at the end
- I don't like the 'main cover story' headline, usually the main story is more implicit that it is actually a main story in a mag ie. it will be large or emboldened
- Your photography is professional but the editing not so much, it looks like you directly placed the images onto the page without doing any background editing or anything, it might've looked better if you removed the background in some of the pics?
Apart from those, all good :)
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ReplyDeleteI think your contents page is great and very eye-catching and also appealing to your target audience. I like the fact that you have included many different images to show what will be included in certain pages and that you have continued to use your colour scheme. I think the black background is great as it allows everything else on the page to really stand out. Lastly your photography is looks very professional.
ReplyDeleteYour contents page looks good. You have used a variety of images, all shot at a high quality. The layout is simple yet effective.
ReplyDeleteMy only suggestions would be:
Page numbers - for a double page you only need to have on page number of the right side of the page.
Front cover image - i don't think the cover page should be on the contents page it looks pointless.
فى حال لديك قطع اثاث تريد توصيلها من الرياض لمصر او العكس من مصر للرياض نحن نقدم لك هذه الخدمة بشكل إحترافى وبأسعار تنافسية ونقوم بجميع المراحل بدءا من التغليف وإستخدام أفضل الاشرطة اللاصقة لضمان عدم ضياع أى من السلع مرورا بالنقل حتى توصيل العفش الى العنوان الذى تريد بالتحديد هذا لاننا افضل شركة شحن لمصر بالرياض .
ReplyDeleteشركة شحن الى مصر شحن لمصر شركات شحن لمصر اسعار الشحن من السعودية الى مصر اسعار الشحن لمصر شركات شحن من الرياض لمصر شحن الى مصر شركات شحن لمصر بالرياض مكتب شحن لمصر شركة شحن بري شركات الشحن في الرياض شركات شحن بالرياض شركات الشحن البري في السعودية شركات الشحن في السعودية ارخص شركة شحن شحن لمصر من الباب للباب افضل شركة شحن شركات شحن دولى شركات الشحن شركات الشحن فى مصر واسعارها شركات شحن دولي شركات الشحن الدولي الشحن الدولي شحن دولي اسعار الشحن من مصر للسعودية