Front cover: Great concept but it needs a few improvements...it doesn't follow conventions of real mags that well in the sense that it doesn't actually include many conventions eg. more images, issue number, puffs, differentiation between main coverline and secondary coverlines etc
DPS: Again, great concept but here are my criticisms: - Do a spell check - Avoid hyphenated words, just put them onto a new line - Your models should smile more! - It's a bit plain like a lot of text to read, maybe you could've rearranged the page by putting pics in different places to break down the text
Front Cover: Great photograph it looks professional, i like how you used your colour scheme to show which was more important on the front cover. However i think you should have used different fonts for your cover lines and also added more cover lines.
DPS: Your DPS is great and i like the layout that you used it looks professional, however i think you should add more space between each question, i think you used too many photographs for the DPS and you should include a pull quote in order to attract the reader.
Front cover:
ReplyDeleteGreat concept but it needs a few improvements...it doesn't follow conventions of real mags that well in the sense that it doesn't actually include many conventions eg. more images, issue number, puffs, differentiation between main coverline and secondary coverlines etc
DPS:
ReplyDeleteAgain, great concept but here are my criticisms:
- Do a spell check
- Avoid hyphenated words, just put them onto a new line
- Your models should smile more!
- It's a bit plain like a lot of text to read, maybe you could've rearranged the page by putting pics in different places to break down the text
Front Cover:
ReplyDeleteGreat photograph it looks professional, i like how you used your colour scheme to show which was more important on the front cover. However i think you should have used different fonts for your cover lines and also added more cover lines.
DPS:
Your DPS is great and i like the layout that you used it looks professional, however i think you should add more space between each question, i think you used too many photographs for the DPS and you should include a pull quote in order to attract the reader.