This is a very well written article Aa'ishah and you have added some relevant research as well as your own ideas. You end rather abruptly, and could have thought about writing a clearer conclusion. In layout, you have chosen appropriate images and have used some conventions such as a pull quote and drop cap. You could have used columns. This is overall a good first attempt at journalism and InDesign. Vanessa
This is a very well written article Aa'ishah and you have added some relevant research as well as your own ideas. You end rather abruptly, and could have thought about writing a clearer conclusion. In layout, you have chosen appropriate images and have used some conventions such as a pull quote and drop cap. You could have used columns.
ReplyDeleteThis is overall a good first attempt at journalism and InDesign.
Vanessa